Lamentation III
Jack’s face expresses a mix of embarrassment and regret.  He thought he was doing the right thing; he finally showed her how he feels.  A few months ago, she had said she loved him.  He thought he could really be honest with someone that loves him.  So he kissed her.  The timing felt right.  They were sharing an electric energy and a palpable sexual tension.  They just had a few drinks.  They were talking about sexual fantasies.  They were sharing deep desires.  In reality, she wasn’t sharing them to be flirtatious.  She was sharing them because she trusted him.  He was someone she would never think of in that way.
Their relationship was never the same after that.  They grew distant and Sara eventually had children.  In fact, after a chance encounter at a restaurant, they never talked again.  The day that Jack decided to be honest with someone and share his deepest insecurities and feelings was the day that he lost Sara forever.  Maybe it was how he did it.  Maybe it was something she was hiding.  It was probably a mix of both.  Regardless, he will never know.
~ü
[This is a film treatment for a series of five lamentations.  Lamentation IV is here.  Lamentation V is here.]
[Image: Emiliano Ponzi : Regrets]

Lamentation III

Jack’s face expresses a mix of embarrassment and regret.  He thought he was doing the right thing; he finally showed her how he feels.  A few months ago, she had said she loved him.  He thought he could really be honest with someone that loves him.  So he kissed her.  The timing felt right.  They were sharing an electric energy and a palpable sexual tension.  They just had a few drinks.  They were talking about sexual fantasies.  They were sharing deep desires.  In reality, she wasn’t sharing them to be flirtatious.  She was sharing them because she trusted him.  He was someone she would never think of in that way.

Their relationship was never the same after that.  They grew distant and Sara eventually had children.  In fact, after a chance encounter at a restaurant, they never talked again.  The day that Jack decided to be honest with someone and share his deepest insecurities and feelings was the day that he lost Sara forever.  Maybe it was how he did it.  Maybe it was something she was hiding.  It was probably a mix of both.  Regardless, he will never know.

[This is a film treatment for a series of five lamentations.  Lamentation IV is here.  Lamentation V is here.]

[Image: Emiliano Ponzi : Regrets]

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